Termeh- You had such great details in your story! Especially the part about how you went to your mom's room. I could visualize the whole story! I also learned how much you love the color pink! I am super proud of your writing and how much you thought about the reader. Well done! <3 Ms Harder
Dear Termeh, I liked how your story described your decision to get your ears pierced. Your bravery was clearly felt through your story. I felt I was there with you. Love Dad
My darling Termeh, I remember that day very clearly. I liked how you told the story with speech bubbles and emotions, which makes the reader feel like they were right there. Excellent illustrations, they match your story perfectly. I loved your reading, like a skilled narrator. Well done my love, xx Mommy
Dear Termeh, I noticed that your story was very detailed and the way you narrated it made it easy for the reader to imagine every moment. I love your detailed drawings too. Keep up the good work :) Khaleh Foorooz and Jobim
Termeh-
ReplyDeleteYou had such great details in your story! Especially the part about how you went to your mom's room. I could visualize the whole story! I also learned how much you love the color pink!
I am super proud of your writing and how much you thought about the reader.
Well done!
<3 Ms Harder
I noticed that you maid nice details. By maria
ReplyDeleteDear Termeh,
ReplyDeleteI liked how your story described your decision to get your ears pierced. Your bravery was clearly felt through your story. I felt I was there with you.
Love Dad
My darling Termeh,
ReplyDeleteI remember that day very clearly. I liked how you told the story with speech bubbles and emotions, which makes the reader feel like they were right there. Excellent illustrations, they match your story perfectly. I loved your reading, like a skilled narrator.
Well done my love,
xx
Mommy
Ilike how you did wot you sad this is Alexandra
ReplyDeleteDear Termeh,
ReplyDeleteI noticed that your story was very detailed and the way you narrated it made it easy for the reader to imagine every moment. I love your detailed drawings too. Keep up the good work :)
Khaleh Foorooz and Jobim