Tuesday, January 7, 2014

Kaylin's post on Wednesday, 8 January 2014

This is my story about the time I went to Rayan's house and there was a big storm.


7 comments:

  1. Great action words Kaylin! We loved hearing you say "boom", "crash", and "whoosh" with such expression! Also enjoyed reading your description of how you and your friends felt during the storm.
    Stacie (Kaylin's mom)

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  2. Great job, Kaylin!!! You are such a good reader. Love, Navana

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  3. Wow, Kaylin!!!! Such a awesome story. Thanks for sharing it with us in California. We love and miss you so much. Have a great day at school. Love, Auntie Janny

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  4. I liked your sounds the sounds were like boom crash and woosh

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  5. I liked your sounds. By maria

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  6. I liked how you used sounds. From Mark

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  7. Wow Kaylin, we enjoyed your boom, crash, woosh rainstorm. It sounds just like the ones we have in Minnesota. We did not know you get thunderstorms in Muscat. Your storms sound scary. Thanks for sharing your story. We are now getting snow storms instead of rain storms, but our snow is very quiet but the wind is very "wooshy."
    Love, Oma and Opa

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