Tuesday, January 7, 2014

Mark's post on Wednesday, January 8, 2014

This is my story it's about when I got scared of a dog in a cave.


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  1. AnonymousJanuary 7, 2014 at 10:29 PM

    MARK, YOUR STORY WAS VERY NICE, I LIKED THE WAY YOU ORGANISED YOUR THOUGHTS TO MAKE IT IN WORDS ,ALSO YOUR CHOICE OF THE LANGUAGE WAS VERY WELL.
    KEEP THE GOOD WORK
    MOM

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 8, 2014 at 7:34 AM

    Great language usage and attention to the details and how the events were described.
    Great job Mark.
    Dad

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 8, 2014 at 9:39 PM

    I like how you said the color uv yore hat fum elijah

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 15, 2014 at 8:33 AM

    I like when you said "no!' Alejandro Segovia

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