Tuesday, January 7, 2014

Eli's post on Tuesday, January 7, 2014

When I got my bird.


2 comments:

  1. I was so excited to listen to your story about the very first day we got Pina. You did such a nice job of introducing the story, giving a beginning, middle and an end, using transition words and writing many details! I also really enjoyed hearing the excitement in your voice and seeing the fantastic illustrations. Great job Eli! Love, Mom

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  2. I like your stori because you got a new bird but did it day.

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