Dear Deren, Your story makes me happy with the way u explain your excitement.I like the way u explain your feelings step by step: first u don't know what to buy, then u decided and you are sure about it, then when u get it i can feel from your words how much it makes you happy. You are able to express your feelings strongly by using words in the story. That makes your story interesting and fun to read.
Dear Deren, We ❤ your story. We loved the way you describe the traffic, we believe you got that from Istanbul. We loved the toy you choose, the mermaid. We loved the way you describe your excitement and the happiness. Love, Your cousins Defne and Yigit and your aunt Guher
What a nice story dear Deren! I really loved the surprising twist in your story: how the traffic chaos gave you an idea for choosing the new toy. It reflects the beautiful surprises that we have in our everyday lives. Just as we are bored, or upset about something, we suddenly find something small, that will make us really happy.
What a nice story dear Deren! I loved the sudden twist in your story: How something as boring as traffic, can suddenly give us a great idea, that will make us really really happy. Isn't our every day lives just like that: Just as we are bored or upset about something, all of a sudden we find something small, that will make us really happy. Can't wait until your next story :) (P.S. Deniz wants a story about dinosaurs :)
Dear Deren, really loved your story. I loved how you give lots of details about the events taking place, which enrich your story and make it much more powerful. I also loved your drawings which makes your story come to life and make me feel like I am also part of the story.
Dear Deren, really loved your story. I loved how you give lots of details about the events taking place, which enrich your story and make it much more powerful. I also loved your drawings which makes your story come to life and make me feel like I am also part of the story.
I liked to see that, you are showing us to make correct decisions will lead us to happy conclusions. Good work and keep up developing your story telling. Love, DaD.
Dear Deren,
ReplyDeleteYour story makes me happy with the way u explain your excitement.I like the way u explain your feelings step by step: first u don't know what to buy, then u decided and you are sure about it, then when u get it i can feel from your words how much it makes you happy. You are able to express your feelings strongly by using words in the story. That makes your story interesting and fun to read.
Dear Deren,
ReplyDeleteI think you made the best decision, the mermaid must be so excited to spend marvelous days with you.
I wish you guys have a lot of fun and adventures in the sea in sunny days.
Aunty Gurgel ;)
Dear Deren,
ReplyDeleteWe ❤ your story. We loved the way you describe the traffic, we believe you got that from Istanbul. We loved the toy you choose, the mermaid. We loved the way you describe your excitement and the happiness.
Love,
Your cousins Defne and Yigit and your aunt Guher
What a nice story dear Deren! I really loved the surprising twist in your story: how the traffic chaos gave you an idea for choosing the new toy. It reflects the beautiful surprises that we have in our everyday lives. Just as we are bored, or upset about something, we suddenly find something small, that will make us really happy.
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What a nice story dear Deren! I loved the sudden twist in your story: How something as boring as traffic, can suddenly give us a great idea, that will make us really really happy. Isn't our every day lives just like that: Just as we are bored or upset about something, all of a sudden we find something small, that will make us really happy. Can't wait until your next story :) (P.S. Deniz wants a story about dinosaurs :)
ReplyDeleteDear Deren, really loved your story. I loved how you give lots of details about the events taking place, which enrich your story and make it much more powerful. I also loved your drawings which makes your story come to life and make me feel like I am also part of the story.
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Dear Deren, really loved your story. I loved how you give lots of details about the events taking place, which enrich your story and make it much more powerful. I also loved your drawings which makes your story come to life and make me feel like I am also part of the story.
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Hi Deren,
ReplyDeleteI liked to see that, you are showing us to make correct decisions will lead us to happy conclusions. Good work and keep up developing your story telling. Love, DaD.
I liked how you used sounds. And you used dialogue. From Mark
ReplyDeleteU uosd a lot of detale . I loved your story.from kaylin.
ReplyDeleteI love your story jannah
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