Alejandro, You did a great job building suspense for your readers! I like how you described the different places you searched for Ana and the way you used dialogue, too. Well done! Mrs. M.
Mom and dad are very proud of your work as a writer. This story is very well writted and here you showed us your abilities and your improvement throughout your writing process. Well done Alejandro! Keep going!
Booooo!! Haha! Thank you for dedicating this story to me Alejandro, it shows me that you remember very well what happened. I'm proud of your work! I'm excited for your next story!
Alejandro is my nephew, he is a unique kid, smart and very witty, he has a limitless imagination and he shows it in this story he wrote. I hope to read many more stories like this one that feed my soul and make me smile. I admire you and I love you with all my heart. Auntie Gisele.
Awww! :) que bello el Ale! Jejeje, el próximo Stephen King venezolano. We are so proud of you. I hope next time you will write a story in french. Gros bisous mon petit lapin!
Alejandro, what a great story you have written!! We are looking forward to read "When I Was Scared Part 2". Excellent job and keep on writing! . Gerardo & Ketty
I like how you shoutid aaaaaaa!!!!
ReplyDeleteAlejandro, You did a great job building suspense for your readers! I like how you described the different places you searched for Ana and the way you used dialogue, too. Well done! Mrs. M.
ReplyDeleteMom and dad are very proud of your work as a writer. This story is very well writted and here you showed us your abilities and your improvement throughout your writing process. Well done Alejandro! Keep going!
ReplyDeleteBooooo!! Haha! Thank you for dedicating this story to me Alejandro, it shows me that you remember very well what happened. I'm proud of your work! I'm excited for your next story!
ReplyDeleteThis was a great story. You are an amazing kid and better writer. Keep on the good work.
ReplyDeleteLove. Tia Michou
Congrats Alejandro!!!! I loved reading your story, you are such a good writer. keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteCongrats Alejandro, you are a very clever kid. I love your story. I'm proud of your work. I miss you. Aunt Yaya
ReplyDeleteThis a really nice story, It makes me feel in your kitchen. Very good Alejo. Besitos
ReplyDeleteAlejandro is my nephew, he is a unique kid, smart and very witty, he has a limitless imagination and he shows it in this story he wrote. I hope to read many more stories like this one that feed my soul and make me smile. I admire you and I love you with all my heart. Auntie Gisele.
ReplyDeleteAwww! :) que bello el Ale! Jejeje, el próximo Stephen King venezolano. We are so proud of you. I hope next time you will write a story in french. Gros bisous mon petit lapin!
ReplyDeleteAlejandro, what a great story you have written!! We are looking forward to read "When I Was Scared Part 2". Excellent job and keep on writing! . Gerardo & Ketty
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