I liked how you used "boom" in your story to tell us how the thunder sounded. I noticed that you were descriptive about how you felt and what you were thinking. You told us what you were doing and had a good timeline of when things happened. - Sage, Kloden's cousin
Kloden, I loved how you made thunder sounds in your story. I thought these sounds really made your story fun to listen to. I also liked that you ran inside to tell your mom. Thanks for sharing your story!
Kloden, I loved the thunder sounds and the dripping sounds in your story. These sounds really made your story fun to listen to and to read. I also thought it was interesting that you ran into the house to tell your mom about the thunder. Thanks for sharing your story.
Kloden, I really enjoyed listening to you read your story. I was surprised you knew the word "Hail". You are very smart. I also loved your pictures. I especially enjoyed the one with the blue drips forming a blue puddle. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Kloden, I really like the pictures you drew that helped tell your story. I also liked how you read the story out loud with a really good and clear voice. I am also glad you ate your dinner in your story. From your Uncle Wes Hackett.
Hi Kloden, I loved your story! My favorite part was when you ate dinner, because I love to eat dinner. I'm glad it finally stopped raining. I am scared of thunder. Merri Hackett Aunt
I really like how you included the sound effects in your story, what a way to bring the story to life. Way to go!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used "boom" in your story to tell us how the thunder sounded. I noticed that you were descriptive about how you felt and what you were thinking. You told us what you were doing and had a good timeline of when things happened. - Sage, Kloden's cousin
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ReplyDeleteI loved how you made thunder sounds in your story. I thought these sounds really made your story fun to listen to. I also liked that you ran inside to tell your mom. Thanks for sharing your story!
Your story was awesome!
ReplyDeleteKloden,
ReplyDeleteI loved the thunder sounds and the dripping sounds in your story. These sounds really made your story fun to listen to and to read. I also thought it was interesting that you ran into the house to tell your mom about the thunder.
Thanks for sharing your story.
Love,
Aunt Camille
Hi Kloden! We enjoyed hearing you read your story! Great sound effects. I was always glad when it rained in Muscat because it wasn't so hot.
ReplyDeleteKloden,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed listening to you read your story. I was surprised you knew the word "Hail". You are very smart. I also loved your pictures. I especially enjoyed the one with the blue drips forming a blue puddle. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Kloden, was that a real story, did it happen in real life? From your cousin Carson Hackett.
ReplyDeleteKloden, did that story take you a long time to write? Did you write it at school? From your cousin Kamrie Hackett.
ReplyDeleteKloden, I really like the pictures you drew that helped tell your story. I also liked how you read the story out loud with a really good and clear voice. I am also glad you ate your dinner in your story. From your Uncle Wes Hackett.
ReplyDeleteHi Kloden, I loved your story! My favorite part was when you ate dinner, because I love to eat dinner. I'm glad it finally stopped raining. I am scared of thunder.
ReplyDeleteMerri Hackett Aunt
Kloden, your story was awesome. I like how you made the sounds of thunder. poom boom poom. Emerson Cousin
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