Tuesday, January 7, 2014

Shruti's post on Wednesday, January 8, 2014

At my Divali story,I used my detail. I even used feelings. I hope you enjoy it!


3 comments:

  1. Aedan, I loved hearing you read your story! I especially liked it when you described the hair "falling like rain". I could really picture your cut hair falling to the ground. Great job sweety! - Love, Mommy

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  2. I liket how u adid a soundword. From jannah

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  3. I like the way you described your expressions and feelings into your words.. Keep it up.. As you practice more you can do more better way next time.. I know my "RAJA" can do it.. Mummy-papa-Parth xoxoxo

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