Dear Finn, I enjoyed hearing you read your story so much. What a cool project to write a story and the publish it digitally! I liked the descriptive words you chose to use, such as 'I was so scared I was SHIVERING', and when you said that you 'zoomed' down the stairs. I am glad you felt 'safe and sound' when you got to me. Daddy and I are proud of the work you are putting into your writing and reading. You are improving every time you practice. Keep up this effort! Love, Mummy xoxoox
Finn, what a great story! I real loved it when you mentioned that there might have been a bear! And the tone you used when you asked the readers " was there really a bear there?" That was so nice that your mom read you a story to help you feel not scared anymore. Great Job! - Aedan's Mom
Dear Finn, I enjoyed hearing you read your story so much. What a cool project to write a story and the publish it digitally! I liked the descriptive words you chose to use, such as 'I was so scared I was SHIVERING', and when you said that you 'zoomed' down the stairs. I am glad you felt 'safe and sound' when you got to me. Daddy and I are proud of the work you are putting into your writing and reading. You are improving every time you practice. Keep up this effort! Love, Mummy xoxoox
ReplyDeleteFinn, what a great story! I real loved it when you mentioned that there might have been a bear! And the tone you used when you asked the readers " was there really a bear there?" That was so nice that your mom read you a story to help you feel not scared anymore. Great Job! - Aedan's Mom
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ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote neatly. And showed not tell. From Mark
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ReplyDeleteI liket your story jannah.
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